托福作文中說(shuō)明文范文

　　題目：shouldapersonwithanincurableillnessspendhislastdaysinahospitalwhereheorshecanreceivethebestpossiblemedicalcare?orshouldthispersonbepermittedtodieathome?inabriefessay,respondtotheabovequestions.besuretoexplainwhichpositionyousupport.

　　試題分析

　　一條件：患不治之癥的患者/在人世間的最后一段時(shí)間/到醫(yī)院接受最好的醫(yī)療與護(hù)理/允許在家謝世。

　　二要求：就上述條件與兩種處理方法發(fā)表意見,說(shuō)明你支持何種做法。

　　三寫作分析：本題是世界范圍內(nèi)經(jīng)常爭(zhēng)論的話題，但至今無(wú)定論.寫作時(shí)可支持任何觀點(diǎn)，寫法用演繹法或歸納法。

　　shouldapersonwithanincurableillnessspendhislastdaysinahospitalwhereheorshecanreceivethebestpossiblemedicalcare?orshouldthispersonbepermittedtodieathome?thesetwoquestionsaredifficulttoanswerandmaycausesomeheatedarguments.myviewisthatwehavetoconsidertwodifferentsituationsandmakeourdecisionsaccordingly.

　　thefirstpossiblesituationisthatthepatientisstillconsciousandabletoexpresshimself.inthiscase,weshouldtalktohimandfindouthisownopinion.ifhewishestostayinahospital,weshouldsendhimthereandtrytogetthebestmedicalcareforhimnomatterhowmuchitwillcost.ifhewantstostayathome,weshouldshowrespectforhisopinionanddoourbestathomeforhimnomatterhowtroublesomeitmaybe.therationaleofthisviewisthatthebestwecandoforadyingpersonistosatisfyhislastwishesexceptwhenhewantsanthanasiainacountryinwhichitisstillillegal.

　　theotherpossiblesituationisthatthepatientisnolongerabletoexpresshimself.inthiscase,itisbettertolethimstayathomeandspendhislastdayswithhisrelatives.thisviewisbasedonthefollowingconsiderations.thisfirstisthatsincethepatientisgoingtodieanyway,itisbetterforhimtodieathomeinsteadofaplacewherehisrelativesarenotallowedtostaywithhimallthetime.thesecondisthatitwouldbeawasteofmoney,time,andenergytohospitalizethepatient.thethirdisthatwhatahospitalcandoforadyingpersoncanonlybringmoresufferingtohim.forinstance,operationsorintravenousdripsareuselessandpainfulandfistaidsappliedtohimcanonlymakehimlivelongertosuffermore.thebestthingahospitalcandoistoreducehispainsinhislastdays,butthiscanalsobedoneathome.

　　inshort,myviewisthatwhenthequestionsareconsideredobjectively,theanswerisclear:itisbetterforhim,forhisrelatives,andforsocietyifthepatientstaysanddiesathome.however,ashumanbeings,wecannotdiscussapatientwithoutemotionalconsiderations.tofullyunderstandthisposition,wecanjustimaginehowwewouldfeelifoneofourrealtiesweresufferingfromanincurableillness.

　　范文寫作分析

　　對(duì)于這個(gè)涉及到復(fù)雜而又微妙的感情之事,作者避免了簡(jiǎn)單的表態(tài)方式。文章采用演繹法,在第一段擺明自己的觀點(diǎn),然后詳細(xì)說(shuō)明,最后再進(jìn)一步說(shuō)明,處理感情方面的考慮。

　　第一段敘述條件,擺明觀點(diǎn)